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1、【精品文档】如有侵权，请联系网站删除，仅供学习与交流冲刺中考英语作文.精品文档.冲刺2011年中考英语作文中考英语作文在整个英语考试中有着举足轻重的地位，如何写好英语作文呢？一、思路1. 审好题仔细审查所给的内容提示（包括文字和图表等），明确要求写的内容，确定文章的体裁、人称、时态等，理顺思路，确定主旨。2. 看要点，写片段对于易于表达的内容，一次成句；对于一时难于表达的内容，写出词组。此时，既注意不遗漏内容要点，也不要随意添加任何内容。二、步骤1. 确定句型，连词成句这个环节是成文的关键，一定要注意做到：（1）选用比较有把握的词汇，用恰当的句型写出确切反映内容要求的句子。在熟悉的基础上，鼓励
2、多用高级词汇和结构复杂的复杂句。如表达“为了”时，可用in order to do 或 so as to do.也可用so that引导目的状语从句。（2）写出的句子要达意，完整，语法正确，合乎习惯，特别是句式、谓语动词形式要有根有据。（3）表达限定的内容有困难时，就要想到“All roads lead to Rome.”这句话，用变通的方法，以达到“曲径通幽”。如要译“他表哥外强中干”这样一句话，表达起来似乎很难，但我们完全可以通过学过的东西将这句话明白贴切地表达出来：His cousin looks strong but in fact, he is rather weak.（4）尽量避免
3、使用汉语式的英语。例如要表达“她睡得很迟”，不可写成：She slept very late. 应该写成：She went to bed very late. 因为“sleep late”表示“睡懒觉”。又如要表达“他一点都不担心他的英语”，不可写成：He is not a little worried about his English.实际上意思完全相反，表达成“他非常担心他的英语”了。应该是：He is not a bit worried about his English. 或：He is not worried about his English at all.2. 连词成句，添减相
4、宜单句写出后，根据短文的内容要求，确定先写什么，后写什么，按照表述内容的情节发展和实际需要，重新排列组合已写成的句子，划分必要的段落，一般分成三段。即：文章的开头（Introduction）、文章的主体(Main body)和文章的结尾(Conclusion).这样写成文章的初稿。在连词成句的过程中，还要注意以下几点：（1）句子或段落间的连接不仅仅是个语言问题，也是个逻辑思维方面的问题，这两者是不能分开的。能注意到这一点，你的文章就能达到条理清楚、层次分明的境界。（2）为了使句子或段落语义连贯，表达合理准确，可以适当加入一些连接词语。如表达转折可用but, however, otherwise
5、等，表达递进可用and, also, besides, Whats more等，表达因果so, therefore, as a result等，表达对比可用at the same time, meanwhile，while等，表达让步可用though, although, even if等。有时还需要加入一些必要的过渡句子以达到承上启下的效果。 （3）仔细推敲在文章的哪些地方可用复杂句。切忌生搬硬套，给人一种为了用复杂句而用复杂句的感觉。要用得自然、得体。要顺应行文的需要，与整个文章浑然一体。尽量使用我们熟悉的宾语从句、状语从句和定语从句。3. 检查修改，定稿誊写检查修改是进一步减少疏漏提高质
6、量的最后程序，这时要对照题目要求，认真检查以下几点：（1）内容有无遗漏或误词，最好一一对应检查。（2）体裁格式对不对。（3）句子是否有语法结构错误，特别要检查句子中的冠词、代词、名词复数、动词的时态、语态、主谓一致等方面是否有错误。（4）句子是否合乎英语表达习惯，是否达意。（5）书写字迹和标点符号是否规范清晰，词数是否基本上符合要求。经过认真修改润色的短文，即可认真工整地誊写在指定的卷面上。抄好后再速读一遍，力求完美。附录1：高分英语作文三原则一、遣词的原则1、一定要尽量使用高等词汇及短语，如果仅仅记住几个简单基础的词汇，而且一味的重复低水平的英语知识点，远远达不到要求。同时，也会给阅卷老师造
7、成视觉疲劳，所以一定要“新颖”来抓住老师的眼球，只有这样，你的作文才能得到高分。比如：最近深受同学们喜欢的畅销小说慕光之城中的男主角爱德华先生是那么的帅气，他冷峻的外表下藏着一颗炽热的心。当我们想表达这个小伙儿十分帅气时，可能首先想到的是handsome，cool and good-looking这三个词，但是，在你使用这三个词的同时，其他的同学也会使用，这样一来千篇一律，没有任何创意，这几个词汇也显得特别的乏味，判卷老师自然也不会对你的作文有任何印象，更不用想要得高分了。因此，在这个时刻，我们一定要用一些高级词汇，比如：attractive，charming等等，如果你非要用以上三个单词，完
8、全可以加上一些等同于very的形容词加以修饰，比如：incredible handsome，extremely cool等等。再比如：我们在描述一个景点的时候，同学们首先想到的形容词是great，wonderful，amazing and interesting等词汇。这些词汇没有任何创新，因此，如果你用以下词汇，效果肯定会完全不同，例如：fantastic，fabulous，marvelous，extraordinary，remarkable等词。不但使判卷老师印象深刻，还可以归为高分那个层次，何乐而不为呢？2、在使用高等词汇及短语的同时不要忘记使用俗词中的不俗意。比如：在09年重庆中考满分
9、作文中写道这样一句话：Im afraid the food in the new school wont agree with me.初看这句话似乎存在语法错误，怎么可以食物不同意我呢？其实不然，这是美国的一句俚语，意思是食物不合胃口。再来看看08年湖北省荆州市中考写作，以My Hometown为主题写篇作文，其中一篇满分作文中写道I was born in a beautiful city with a rich culture. People in the town are hard-working though they are having a richer and better li
10、fe.在同一篇文章中用到了同样的词语rich但却是不同意，一个表达了丰富的文化，另一个则表示过着富裕的生活。这样巧妙的使用词语，怎能不让老师给满分或是高分呢？要想达到以上的写作水平就要求同学们在平时的训练中，在平时要有意识地强化“复杂，高级”这两个概念，但考前十多天，不能这么做了，以稳为主。二、造句的原则句子是表达一个完整意思的最小单位，所以造句能力在英文写作中是非常重要的。好的英语句子能够生动，形象，准确的表达内容。所以要想写出漂亮的书面表达，必须从写好句子开始。如何才能写出好句子来呢？我们首先可以从山寨开始。比如轩尼诗XO有句广告语非常优美，它是这样说的：Tome，the past was
11、 black and white，but the future is always colorful. 再比如，我们众所周知两句话Nothing is impossible！和Anything is possible！有很多同学在自己的作文中写过这两句话，但是太俗套了，现在又出现了另一句来自佳能广告中广告语Impossible made possible.如果可以在自己的作文中用上这句话，那一定大不同了。当然，我们不可以总是山寨，因此，可以借用一些句子，稍加修饰后变为自己的。比如：A diamond lasts forever.钻石恒久远，一颗永流传。这是非常经典的一句话，但是离我们的生活有些
12、远且作文中用到的几率比较小，不过我们可以稍加修饰就可以使用在自己的作文中了。比如：Friendship lasts forever. Maternal love lasts forever. The teachers love lasts forever.不但老师看着开心，分数自然也就上去了。当然，以上的方法有时候很奏效，如果碰到stubborn的老师就完蛋了，还不如使用谚语这种经久不衰的佳句为自己的文章添彩。三、谋篇的原则优秀的作文都有个共性就是有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。文章的连贯性和紧凑感是很重要的。句子作为最小的表达意思的语言单位，如果只是被随意的整合，是无法达到有效
13、表达的目的。如：1. 表并列 and, also, too, as well, as well as, both and , not only but also, either or, neither nor, in addition (另外), besides (而且), furthermore (而且), Whats more (而且), Whats worse (更糟糕的是)2. 表对比 but, however, yet, nevertheless (然而), although, though, while, in spite of (尽管), instead of 3. 表条件 if
14、, unless 4. 表原因 because, because of, as a result of (因为), for, since, as, in order to, in order that, so that 5. 表结果 so, therefore, as a result, sothat, suchthat6. 表说明 like, such as, for example7. 表强调 surely, certainly, of course, without any doubt (毫无疑问) , above all (尤其),8. 表顺序 first(ly), second(ly
15、), first of all, then, next, afterwards, finally 9. 表总结 in a word, in all, in general, in short, on the whole, generally speaking (一般说来), in my opinion (以我之见)四、首尾的原则文章的结尾没有固定的模式，同学们可以根据表达主题的需要灵活创造。一般情况下，记叙文和说明文经常采用自然结尾的方法；但夹叙夹议和发表观点类的文章则往往有结束语，以使文章首尾呼应，结构完整。文章结尾的形式也因文章类别和开头的风格而灵活多变。1. 自然结尾，点明主题随着文章的
16、结束，文章自然而然地结尾。如“Helping the Policeman（帮助警察）”的结尾可以是：The two children were praised by the police and they felt happy。再如“The Tortoise and the Hare（龟兔赛跑）”的结尾可以是：When the hare got to the tree，the tortoise had already been there。2. 首尾呼应，升华主题在文章的结尾可以用含义较深的话点明主题，深化主题，起到“画龙点睛”的效果。如“I Love My Hometown（我爱家乡）”的结
17、尾可以是：I love my hometown，and I am proud of it。3. 反问结尾，引起深思这种方式的结尾虽然形式是问句，但意义却是肯定的，而且具有一定的强调作用，可引起他人的深思。如“Learning English can give us a lot of pleasure（学英语能为我们带来许多乐趣）”的结尾可以是：If we learn English well，we can Dont you think learning English is great fun？4. 表达祝愿，阐述愿望这种方式的结尾常出现在书信或演讲稿的文体中，表示对他人的祝福或对将来的展望等
18、。如“A Letter to the Farmers（给农民们的一封信）”的结尾可以是：I hope the farmers life will be better and better.另外，书信的结尾常有以下形式的祝福语： Best wishes; I wish you a merry Christmas and a happy new year; I wish you have a good time等。附录2：中考英语作文范文1. 2010年扬州市中考英语作文范文 你将代表学校参加扬州市中学生英语演讲比赛，演讲的题目是Learning to get along with our par
19、ents。请你用英语写一篇演讲稿，内容要点如下：现象经常跟父母发火,甚至几天不讲话原因1.父母过分关注分数 2.我们措施 (不少于三点）1.我们应该和父母沟通2.我们3.我们要求：1)表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯； 2)必须包括所有相关信息，并作适当发挥；3)词数：100词左右(演讲稿的开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数）； 4)不得使用真实姓名和校名等。Good morning, ladies and gentlemen. Today my topic is Learning to get along with our parents.These days, most of us feel i
20、t is hard to get along with our parents. We easily get angry for no reason and even dont talk to them for days. I think the causes are as follows. First, our parents only care about our marks and it makes us stressed. Second, we are unwilling to communicate with them.Its time for us to change. First
21、, we can communicate with them by sharing our joys and worries with them. Then， we can help do some housework to show our love for them. Finally, we should achieve a balance between our school work and hobbies so that they wont feel worried about us.Thats all for my speech. Thank you!2. 2011年中考指要英语作
22、文范文 (1) My name is Li Ming. I am a middle school student. I go to school on foot every day. I always remember to turn off the lights, the TV and the fans when I leave the classroom. When I am not using water, I always turn off the tap. I often reuse water, for example, when I finish washing the clot
23、hes, I use the water to clean the floor and water flowers. I never use plastic bags. I think saving paper is necessary, so I often make full use of paper. Its important for us to live a low-carbon life to protect the environment.(2)Ladies and gentlemen! Its my honor to tell you about the changes to
24、our school.In the past, there was only a small playground. The books in the library were old and there were only a few kinds of them. The number of the trees and flowers were small.But things have greatly changed these years. Now we have a bigger playground and more basketball courts. More different
25、 kings of new books can be lent to us. Our school is as beautiful as a garden with lots of green trees all year round.I think its lucky of us to have such good studying environment. We will work harder and serve the people better in the future.I hope you will enjoy your stay in our school. Thank you
26、 very much!(3)Dear Stephen, I am writing to tell you about my problem with my teacher. I dont know how to deal with it and would like your help. You know I am crazy about space travel. In my spare time I often go to the library to find something to read. This makes my teacher very angry. To him, goo
27、d marks are everything and I should spend more time on my lessons, even at weekends. I think healthy hobbies are helpful for our studies. If I can achieve a balance between my schoolwork and my hobby, it will be of great value to my future development. But I dont think my teacher understands me. I f
28、eel bad about that. What shall I do? Can you offer me some suggestions? I am looking forward to your reply.Best wishesLi Hua(4)Good afternoon, everyone! It is a great honour, for me to make a speech on behalf of the graduating class of 2011. How time flies! I used to be very proud as a student of ou
29、r school, but now I have to leave this beautiful school camp. We learned a lot during these three years and we have made great progress. The teaching of our teachers is lively and interesting. We will never forget the colourful activities in our school, especially the charity show which we organized
30、 for the people in Yushu after the great earthquake. Well remember our teachers education. Thanks for our parents support and classmates help. I hope more and more students can go to their own ideal high school. Our teachers will have more fun working and living. I believe our school will be better
31、in the future. Thats all, thank you very much. (5) More and more Chinese middle school students have gone abroad to study now. Studying abroad may have a lot of advantages. The students usually become fluent in the language and can make friends with people from different backgrounds and they learn t
32、o depend on themselves. Of course, studying abroad may have its disadvantages as well. It is possible that some of them may fall behind in their studies. On the other hand, some students may feel it unsafe to stay abroad on their own. Moreover, their parents may be concerned about the cost. In my op
33、inion, middle school students had better finish their college education in China and then go abroad to experience another education and culture. (6) Recently I made a survey about the purposes of getting on the Internet in my class. There are fifty students in my class. The girls favorite is chattin
34、g, but few boys like it. Boys like playing games best and girls also like it, with 40% of the boys and 25% of the girls. Both boys and girls like reading news or sending e-mails on the Internet. As for studying, the numbers of the boys and girls are the same, though only several of them will use the
35、 Internet as a tool to study. Now the Internet is playing a more and more important part in our life, so we should know what to do to make good use of it. (7)Boys and girls, We high school students do have some growing pains, but we can keep away from them wisely. First, some of us are unhappy about
36、 their appearances and shapes. We neednt care about them too muchInstead, we need to do more reading to improve our inner beauty. Second, sometimes we feel very worried because our teachers, parents and classmates cant understand us, and some make complaints about having fewer friends. As to this, w
37、e can suggest having a heart-to-heart talk with them if that happens. Also, we can be open and friendly to each other. To some, the third worry is that we may fall behind others and as a result we feel stressed. I think, if we learn to encourage ourselves and set a proper goal, we can feel relaxed a
38、nd confident. Thats all. Thanks for your listening.3. 2010年扬中树人第三次模拟考试作文范文Dear students,This spring, most parts in the southwest of China are short of water. It is difficult for more than 20,000,000 people to drink water. The people there dont have enough clean drinking water to drink because it has
39、nt rained for a long time. Whats worse, a great number of wild animals and plants die because of lack of water. I am so shocked that I hope people around the world can save water and protect our environment. We should take action to prevent natural disaster.Now so many people in Yunnan and some other provinces are in difficulty. I think we should try our best to help them. We can donate bottles of drinking water to them. We can also raise money for them to help them dig more wells. In a word, lets stretch our helping hands to help those in need.Thanks for your joining!