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1、精选优质文档-倾情为你奉上专题02 The Description of Rain本专题聚焦于雨景、通过不同的雨景烘托或喜或悲的情感 2.1 Kissed by the rain and glistening, the wet ground is cold under foot. Stepping off the path and into the shaggy grass I feel the squelch of the mud beneath. The water rises up and runs between my toes. The birds busy themselves a
2、round me, not caring that Im there, all they want is the worms that have come up for air.译文:潮湿的地面走起来很冷,被雨水亲吻后闪闪发光。走下小路,走进草丛,我感到脚下泥泞的吱吱声。水涨起来,在我的脚趾间流动。鸟儿们在我周围忙碌着,不关心我在哪儿,他们只想要抓那些爬上来呼吸新鲜空气的虫子。生词难词shaggy长而乱的;乱蓬蓬的;头发蓬乱的 squelch发吧唧声,发扑哧声; worms蠕虫;寄生虫;肠虫;幼虫;蠕动,曲折行进;给驱肠虫;worm的第三人称 技法讲解:拟人的运用E.g. Kissed by
3、the rain and glistening, the wet ground is在这里,我们形容雨落在地上,不直接说the rain fall on the ground(雨落在地上),而是说the ground is kissed by the rain(雨亲吻着路面),就是一个拟人的手法,kiss是一个简单的词,但是用了拟人的手法后,使得整个句子充满文学性,这种写法在续写中是很推崇的,能让你的句子优美、生动、形象、传神。再比如:E.g. The rain drummed on the window, bidding farewell to the last beam of sunlig
4、ht.雨落在窗户上,多么平常的场景,但是在这个句子中我们用了drummed on,就是说雨敲打在窗户上好像敲起了小鼓,瞬间变得生动形象。紧接着,写太阳落山、黄昏来临,我们也不直接写,而是转了个弯,说The rain bid farewell to the last beam of sunlight.(雨向最后一缕阳光告别),是不是很优美。这套材料中,类似的拟人用法还有很多,就不再一一列举,请同学们自己留意,细细体会这种用法的妙处。 2-2. Softly splashing water droplets hit the car windows as we drive onwards. The
5、skies are overhung with a blanket of grey, so much so that I can barely tell the difference between the sky and clouds.译文 :当我们向前行驶时,溅起的水珠轻轻地落在车窗上。天空覆盖着一层灰色,我几乎看不出天空和云的区别。亮点词汇softly轻轻地; 轻柔地; 温和地; 柔和地 droplets小滴; droplet的复数 onwards adv.从起一直; 向前; 前往 overhung悬垂; 悬挂; 突出于某物之上; overhang的过去分词和过去式 so much so
6、 that到这种程度以致; 甚至于 barely仅仅; 刚刚; 勉强可能; 几乎不; 几乎没有; 刚好; 不超过 2-3. Darkened gray smudges of wool threateningly surrounded the sky, like a predator would encircle its prey. A startling low rumble rang loud in the cool fall air, the sky roaring with satisfaction. Trickles of liquid hit the ground with as m
7、uch force as a small child. Gradually, drizzles turn into canon fires, barricading everything in its way. 译文:乌云布满天空,就像捕食者包围猎物一样。凉爽的秋风中传来一阵震耳欲聋的低沉隆隆声,天空似乎满意地咆哮着。涓涓细流像小孩子一样猛烈地撞击地面。逐渐地,毛毛细雨变得像加农炮一样猛烈,阻挡住了一切。亮点词汇hit the ground 触地 drizzles 下毛毛雨; 下蒙蒙细雨; 洒落; 毛毛细雨; drizzle的第三人称单数和复数 barricading 阻碍,阻挡; barri
8、cade的现在分词 生词难词smudges污迹,污痕; 把擦模糊; 变模糊; 弄脏; 留下污迹; smudge的第三人称单数和复数技法讲解:比喻的运用比喻主要可分simile(明喻)和metaphor(暗喻)两种句中的darkened gray smudges of wool暗喻密布的乌云,属于metaphorlike a predator would encircle its prey则是将乌云攒聚在天空的景象比作捕食者围猎的场景,属于similecanon fires是加农炮的意思,比喻大雨磅礴的场面,用得极为生动 2-4.A sense of cleanliness caresses t
9、he atmosphere, washing away all impurities. A dense earthly sweet smell rises from the ground, enveloping everything within its soft embrace.译文:清新的感觉抚慰着空气,洗去了所有的杂质。一股浓郁的泥土般的香味从地上升起,把一切都包裹在它柔软的怀抱里。亮点词汇caresses抚摩;爱抚;亲吻;caress的第三人称单数和复数 A sense of 感;的感觉;观念 cleanliness清洁;清新 washing away冲刷 earthly人间的;尘世的
10、;世俗的;可能的 enveloping包住;裹住;盖住;envelop的现在分词 embrace抱;拥抱;欣然接受,乐意采纳;信奉;包括;包含;拥抱,怀抱 2-5 The heavy rains have carved a miniature canyon in the path. Doubtless the soil was made soft by the gentle rainfall the previous week and so was no match for the sudden deluge . Hayley skips from side to side, thrilled
11、 with the new addition to the woodland walk.译文:暴雨在道路上冲击出了一个微型峡谷。毫无疑问,前一周的温和降雨使土壤变软了,这与突然降临的瓢泼大雨截然不同。海莉从一边跳到另一边,为森林散步的新体验感到兴奋。亮点词汇carve v.雕刻 doubtless大概;几乎肯定地 no match for不能与相比;敌不过 deluge暴雨;大雨;洪水;涌现的事物;蜂拥而至的事物;使涌来;使充满;泛滥;淹没 skips from side to side 从一边跳到另一边,来来回回地蹦蹦跳跳 (想象一下,下雨的时候路上有水坑,所以就有了skips from s
12、ide to side) thrilled非常兴奋;极为激动; 生词难词miniature a.很小的;微型的;小型的 n.微型画;小画像;缩微模型;微型复制品 canyon n.(周围有悬崖峭壁的)峡谷 2-6 Rain and tears mingle on my face, salty tracks blending into the fresh sky-fallen trickles. Only the pinkness of my eyes gives any clue to my sadness.译文 :雨水和泪水在我脸上交织到一起,只有我的略略泛红的眼睛能暗示出我内心的悲伤。亮点词汇mingle v.与结合; 使混合; 使联结; 相交往,混杂其中 blending使混合; 掺和; 混合; 融合; 调和,协调; blend的现在分词 give clue to暗示,提供线索 生词难词 trickle v.(使)滴,淌,小股流淌;(使)慢慢走,缓慢移动n.细流;涓流;稀稀疏疏缓慢来往的东西专心-专注-专业