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1、精选优质文档-倾情为你奉上（一）Dear Elli,Im a senior student. I like make friends with people but I do my best to get on well everyone. But in last week I found that one of my friends wrote in her English diary that she disliked me and that he didnt want to be my friend any more. Now she has started to make fun of
2、 me because of Im fat. Im kind to her, but why cant she be friend of mine? Other problem is about my weight. Should I do less exercise or use pills? And do you knowany other way? Please give me some advices. Yours, Mary（二）Dear Sir,I am now a college student at Peking University. Im quite interested
3、in the position offering by your website for part-time English reporters. I think Im fit the job. As a student, Ive read a lot and have many knowledge in different field. Im fond of English and do well in both speaking and writing. Besides, Im easily to get along with and I enjoy working together wi
4、th another.Above all, I once work as a reporter for my college broadcast station. So Im sure I can do the job well if I will get the chance work for a website. Im looking forward to your reply.（三）Have you ever heard from the saying: All work and no play make Jack a dull boy? What this means is that
5、if youstudy all the times you will become a boring person. You must go out and having fun with your friends, otherwise you will lose him. No one wants to be friends with the person who that only works and studies. Perhaps you have a confidence problem. Please try remember that the work you do is for
6、 yourself rather than for anyone else. You do not have to compete your classmates. No one can be happier in studying seven day and seven nights a week.（四）Dear Tracy，Although Im 1 6 years old，but my father still treats me as a careless children. He doesnt value my opinions. He is very strict with me
7、and often punishes me about leaving things lying around in the house while he did this all time. I think he fails to set an example me to follow. But he often says：“Doing as I say，not as I do.”Even worse，he points out my past mistakes to guests，making me feel hurting. I love my father, but I cant be
8、ar what he does. I have been tried many times to talk with he but he never listens. Please, help me.（五）Every morning Steve went to work by train. As he has a long trip, he always buys newspaper. It helps make the time passing more quickly. One Tuesday morning, he turned over the sports page. He want
9、ed to see the report about an important football match the night before. The report was so interesting that he forgot to get off at his station. He did not know it unless he saw the sea. He got on at the next station, and had to wait a long time for a train to go back. It was no doubt that he arrive
10、d late at the office. His boss was angry when Sieve told to him why he was late. “Work is very important than football! ”, he shouted.（六）When my father bought me a computer as a birthday gift for me in last year, I felt very excited. As we all know, computers are getting more and more usefully now.
11、Much information can be stored in them. We can also learn that has lately happened in the world on the internet. In past, people had to do lots of work which was very dangerous. Now, but, computers can do it instead. When an exam is coming, I often did some exercises on my computer. Then it will cor
12、rect it and tell me the right answers. In this way it is very convenient for me to prepare the exam than before. The computer has become my real friend. （七）In 10th April this year, as Li Ming was leaving his home in the morning, he got into the lift together a woman. When the lift got to the four fl
13、oor, it stopped and a middle-aged man enter. Once the man got in, he snatched the womanshandbag. He pulled both Li Ming and the woman out of the lift. Li Ming ran downstairs. When he reached for the ground floor, he saw the man walked out. He told the caretaker at once and they both followed thief t
14、o a restaurant nearby which they met two policemen. Li Ming told them all about the case and the thief has finally caught. （八）One day last week I went a walk in the country. In the morning the weather was well and the sun was shining; the sky was blue and there were no could. Soon a cool wind starte
15、d blown and black clouds were covered the sun and then it started to rain. There were no houses in sight, but I got very wet.After a hour or so, I managed to catch a bus which took me home. But when I arrived I has shiveringand I knew I had caught a bad cold. I must have taken my coat. I had nothing
16、 to do but to stay at home and wait for a doctor.（九）I visited my aunt in the countryside near the city in last week. I was surprised to see that great changes had been taken place in the countryside. Take my aunts family for example. We supply precious trees and flowers to the stores in the city and
17、 have over ten workers working for themselves. Their familys income reached as much 100,000 yuan last year. Nor only did they have a house, a car and computers, they can also afford a trip abroad every year. When asking what else they needed most, they said that they wanted to learn a few English so
18、 that they could do business with foreigners directly. To their delighted, my cousin can use that he has learned from university to help them with overseas trade.（十）Thank you for your e-mail ! You asked me about my friends and how we like to do . Well , I guess I do what most people to do . I like r
19、eading books, watching films and listen to music . My favourite sport is volley-ball. Most of my friend play volleyball together with me . My best friend is two years elder than me .She goes to a different school , but we always get together after school to talk and have funs . We sometimes do homew
20、ork together .What about yourself ? Tell me something about yourself , your friends and what you like to do . I had also like to know something about China . We have read China in school and I am very interesting in learning more about it . Please e-mail me soon ! Lisa （十一）Here is a photo which Ive
21、kept for many years. Look, the child in it is me . Do you think it that I was very lovely? Yes .You see , I was making face . There was a hat on my head while there were no shoes on my foot . I asked my mother how old I was them . Mother said that I was three years old in that time . Can you see the
22、 house all making of wood ? The house which was new then , but it is very old now . I was born in this old house and lived here for eighteen years . I like living here , because there were many friendly neighbours we get along very good with each other , but its a great pity that We will move away s
23、oon . To tell a truth , I really cant bear to part from them . （十二）Good morning, everyone. Yesterday I received a letter from a elderly gentleman. He told me the other day he saw that some student in our school uniform crowded onto a bus without waiting their turns. On the bus they refuse to offer t
24、heir seats for old people. What was worse, they even said dirty words to each other. I am very much sorry for this. Todays youth are tomorrows old people. Respect the old and caring for the young is a fine tradition of our Chinese. Every one of us have the responsibility to keep it up. I hope that y
25、ou can learn something this incident and you will have good manners whether you are inside or outside the school. Thank you.（十三）Hello!Im Hannah, is former Editor of Kiwiboxs Life & People section.Ive now moved and became the Senior Editor of Books & School. A little about me you may not know: I am 1
26、7- year old high school junior from Arizona. Ive been on Kiwibox for January of 2004,which I became a reporter. Outside of Kiwibox, my hobbies include music, writing and just hanging out and try to get through high school. Im really happily to be a part of the Books & School section. I love read and
27、 write, so book reviews are always a lot of funs. If you have any questions or comments about this section, Id love to answer it. You can reach me at gingermulatta.（十四）Henry Royce did not like his car, that ran badly and often broke up. So he decided to make better car himself, but in 1904 he produc
28、ed his first new model. Charles Rolls, a car maker, was very interesting in Royces car, and soon Rolls and Royce go into business together. One of their first model was the Silver Ghost. In 1907, a Silver Ghost broke the worlds record by drive 14,371 miles without breaking down once. After the drive
29、, it was cost just over 2 to put the car back into perfect condition. This is not surprising that the Silver Ghost was regarded “the best car in the world”. （十五）How much times do you spend with your parents? When did you last tell them what is on your mind? You parents are your dearest people in the
30、 world when you are young. And they always care of you deep. But even though many children still love their mum and dad, families may become more close as you get older. The end of the year is a time for families to get together. Have you ever thought what you can show your parents that you love the
31、m? Find chance and do something for them or to have a sincere talk withthem. If you can do this, your parents will be very happy.（十六）“Practice makes perfect” was an old saying . It tells us that it does not any matter if we are slow at doing something . As long as we keep on trying and practice , we
32、ll do a good job in the end . The saying is especial useful in English study .Since a student is poor at speaking, he should grasp every chance to open mouth and speak English . His oral English may be excellent one day due to his hard works . Not only is the saying useful in English study , it is a
33、lso helpful in our day life . To an extent , it is no short cut in doing everything since key to success lies in“Practice makes perfect”. (十七)At a Friday night, a poor young artist stood at the gate of the subway station and played his violin with large piece of paper on the groundBefore long , he w
34、as surrounding with people, who were all attracted by the word on that paper. It said,“ last night, a gentleman put an important thing into my hat by mistaken. Please come to claim it soon.” Seeing this, people wondered why it could be. After about half an hour, a man came and brought back his lotte
35、ry which won a prize of 500,000. Late someone asked the violinist: “ Why dont you take the lottery ticket for yourself? ”He said,“While I dont have much money, I live happily. However , I lose honesty, I wont be happy forever.” (十八)A few months after returning the US from Germany, I took part in a c
36、ollege course in French. Since I have learned to speak German good in Germany, I thought that it might be interested to begin studying another language. At the first class, the teacher asked us do a pronunciation exercise, in which he would say one word or two in French, and each student would do th
37、eir best to copy. When he got to me, he kept having me to say more words, and I finally asked him why. I find it great funs. Its the first time Ive heard an American speak French with a German accent. he explained it. （十九）One day I happen to find a chatting room on my QQ, there people were chatting
38、in English . I tried to chat with some of them . To my surprised . I found the oral English of some junior students were better than me . I asked them for advice and they told me to practise more on QQ. But every day after that I would spend one hour practise my oral English on QQ. Day by day I lear
39、ned from many useful words and expressions . With time went by, I found that I could even communicate some college students freely .（二十）While traveled to Paris on a bus, I became very sick. A well-dressing man on the bus helped me great. He took me off the bus, found out where the doctors office. an
40、d took me to there himself. The next day, he came to visit me. I didnt speak French well, so I cant talk with him very much. However, even if we couldnt talk, but we could communicate. I communicated myself thanks to his great kindness, and he communicated his concern for my healthy. Through this ex
41、perience I have learned that communication can take place without much actual language at all. （二十一）The Internet is playing a important part in our daily life. On the net, we can learn about news both home and abroad and some other informations as wellWe can also make phone calls, send messages by e
42、-mail，go to net schools，learn foreign languages by ourselvesBeside，we can enjoy music，watch sports matches，and play the chess or cardsThe net even help us do shopping，make a chat with others and make friends with them. In word，the Internet has made our life more easier （二十二）During the weekend I trav
43、eled by air the first time in my life. I generally travel by train and bus. It is both cheaper and safe. But this was a short journey. In the beginning I did not feel very happily, but this feeling did not last longer. The journey was very exciting. I was soon high up in the sky among the cloud. The
44、 views of mountains, fields and rivers were interested. I enjoyed my short and comfortable journey very much. This experience have shown that traveling in air is actually the safest way of make journeys. (二十三)I went to see the film after supper. On my way to the cinema. I met an English woman, whom
45、had lost her way. I gave up the chance see the film and took her to her hotel. While go there, I told her about great changes that had been taken place here in the past few years and she had told me something about her country. Although I missed the film, but I still felt very happy, for I had not o
46、nly helped her out of trouble but practiced my speaking English. If I had not worked hard on English, I would not have been able to help him. (二十四)One day, I was cooking in the kitchen as the telephone rings. I went to answer it immediately. She was my close friend, Lisa. When we were talking on a p
47、hone, the fire alarm sounded. I ran back to the kitchen. The room full of smoke and the beef was badly burnt. I quickly turned off the gas, opening all the windows, and then went out of the house. In my surprise, two fire engines were outside my house. I am rather worried. I told about the firemen t
48、hat it was my careless cooking which caused the heavy smoke.(二十五)I received your letter was dated April l6 the day before yesterday. All of our family greatly delighted to learn how you are getting along very well with your lessons. Time passes quickly. After dozens of days, youll finish the middle school. What pleases us most is that you do very good to make up your mind to enter for the college entrance examination this summer. What wonderful it is ! Dad, as well as Mom and I, is with you. We wished you to make better use of your time. The full preparations you make, the sure