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1、精选优质文档-倾情为你奉上PEP小学英语五年级上册各单元作文范例及点评My English TeacherMiss Tang is my English teacher. Shes very pretty. She is tall and thin. She has two big eyes and a small mouth. Her hair is long. She likes cats very much. And she likes singing and dancing, too. Her English is very good. We often play games in E
2、nglish classes. She is very kind to us. We all love her.【要领点评】这篇作文的题目是“我的英语老师”，是一篇介绍人物的作文。小作者开门见山，直接点题，首先介绍了英语老师的姓名，然后逐一介绍了她的外貌特征、喜好、英语水平、上课特点以及师生情感等。同学们在写作文时，要注意使用自己最熟悉的词组，以免写出一些错句子。写作时要注意意思连贯、语句通顺、标点正确、书写清晰、规范等。My Days of the weekIm a student and I am in Grade 5.I get up at six oclock every day. I
3、 have breakfast at half past six, and go to school at seven oclock. I have classes from Monday to Saturday. I have an English class on Friday and I have a PE class on Tuesday. I dont have to go to school on school, and I like to go swimming on that day.【要领点评】 这篇作文的题目是“我的一周”，小作者没有说一些空话，而是从自己的亲身经历写起，叙
4、述了自己一周七天的所作所为，并特别强调了星期天的喜好，写得自然、流畅。 同学们写作文时要注意人称及谓语动词的变化，要依据提示，结合自己的实际，写自己身边熟悉的事情。My Favourite Food Do you know what this is? Guess! Its colour is yellow. Its long and thin. It looks like a small boat and crescent. Oh, it is a banana. Do you know what that is? Guess again! Its colour is orange. Its
5、round. It looks like a small ball and a small lantern. Oh, it is an orange. I like then a lot. I like ice-creams. I like to chew gum. Chocolates and candies are yummy. I like them very much. How about you? Whats your favourite food?【要领点评】 My Favourite Food 是一篇很成功的文章，小作者并不是简单地列举出自己最喜欢的每一种食物，而是有详有略地进行
6、介绍。整篇文章用词准确、语言流畅、没有语法错误。另外，文章中出现了一些生词，可见小作者是用心查字典了。I can help do houseworkI am a girl. My name is Li Ling. Im in Class Three, Grade Five. Im helpful at home. I can water the flowers, empty the trash and sweep the floor. After meals, I can help my mother do the dishes. On Sunday, I can wash the cloth
7、es. What about you? Are you helpful, too?【要领点评】 本篇作文的题目是“我可以帮助做家务”，作者主要叙述自己在家帮助做的事情，介绍自己的名字，所在年级及在家能做的家务，很详细，到位。写作时还要注意大小写和时态。In The Kitchen This is the kitchen of my family. Its big and nice. Look! My mother is cooking in it. This is a microwave and that is a stove. There is a big table here. There
8、 are many things on it. What are these? They look yummy! Oh, theyre strawberries. And what are those? They are grapes.【要领点评】 这篇作文的题目是“在厨房”里，作者根据自己家的厨房情况。介绍厨房里有微波炉和电炉，有一张大桌子和桌子上的物品等，以及妈妈在做饭，非常真实。My Village My village is very beautiful. There are many houses in the village. Near the village, there is
9、a forest. A small river is in front of the village. The water in it is very clean. We can see some fish in the river. Near the river, you can see a mountain. Some flowers and grass are on the mountain. I like my village. Welcome to my village!【要领点评】 本文以“我的村庄”为题描述了自己家乡的风景。介绍了村庄的房屋、森林、河流及大山，使人看了这篇作文后确实感觉到“我的村庄”的美丽。同学们在写作时，可仔细想一下自己的村庄或所在城市的特点，尽量使用本单元学过的单词或短语进行叙述。专心-专注-专业