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1、2013 高考英语二轮复习精品资料专题 16 书面表达名校测试（教师版）1. 【2013 届江西临川一中第三次模拟】书面表达(满分 25 分)林书豪 (Jeremy Lin)在 NBA 的优异表现在全球掀起了一股 林旋风 。近期某网站就林书豪现象对网民进行了一次调查，结果见下表。请根据下面表格的文字内容和饼状图，用英语写一篇短文，短文内容须包括表中提供的所有信息。【参考范文】Recently, a survey on Jeremy Lin has been conducted among netizens on a website. People surveyed have various o
2、pinions about his success and his future. Some of them consider diligence as an important factor of his success. Some of them think Lin possesses a remarkable talent for basketball. It is also believed that the education he has received contributes to his success. Other think of luck as one of the f
3、actors leading to his success.As for Lin possible achievements in the future, 70 % of them believe that he will make more achievements in NBA than Yao Ming, while 20% of them hold the opposite opinion. The rest have no idea about the matter.Jeremy Lin has many good qualities that we can learn from.
4、We are supposed to aim high and make every effort to achieve great success. In addition, we 精品资料 - - - 欢迎下载 - - - - - - - - - - - 欢迎下载 名师归纳 - - - - - - - - - -第 1 页，共 19 页 - - - - - - - - - - should our best to overcome whatever difficulties we meet, instead of losing heart. Only by doing so can we
5、realize our dreams in the future.【经典句子】1.As for Lin possible achievements in the future, 70 % of them believe that he will make more achievements in NBA than Yao Ming, while 20% of them hold the opposite opinion.2.Jeremy Lin has many good qualities that we can learn from.3. Only by doing so can we r
6、ealize our dreams in the future.4. It is also believed that the education he has received contributes to his success.2. 【2013 届北京东城区高三期末】情景作文假设你是红星中学高三（1）班的学生李华，校报英语园地在开展征稿活动。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，将你们班近期美化教室的活动记述下来，向校报投稿。词数不少于60。【请务必将情景作文写在答题卡指定区域内）【参考范文】精品资料 - - - 欢迎下载 - - - - - - - - - - - 欢迎下载 名师归纳 - - -
7、 - - - - - - -第 2 页，共 19 页 - - - - - - - - - - Last month our monitor suggested at a class meeting that we do something to decorate our classroom. Some classmates wanted to hang several pretty pictures on the wall while others thought it would be great to put some plants in the classroom. Most of us
8、 preferred the second idea. In the following week a variety of beautiful plants were brought to the school which immediately created a relaxing atmosphere. Every day after class we devoted our spare time into caring these plants watering them regularly. With fragrant flowers around us we felt at pea
9、ce with ourselves and it surely helped us reduce some stress.【经典句子】1Some classmates wanted to hang several pretty pictures on the wall while others thought it would be great to put some plants in the classroom.2In the following week a variety of beautiful plants were brought to the school which imme
10、diately created a relaxing atmosphere.3. With fragrant flowers around us we felt at peace with ourselves and it surely helped us reduce some stress.3. 【2013 届北京东城区高三期末】开放作文（ 15 分）请根据下面提示，写一篇短文。词数不少于50。In your spoken English class, your teacher shows you the following picture You are asked to describ
11、e the picture and explain how you understand it精品资料 - - - 欢迎下载 - - - - - - - - - - - 欢迎下载 名师归纳 - - - - - - - - - -第 3 页，共 19 页 - - - - - - - - - - （请务必将开放作文写在答题卡指定区域内）【参考范文】In the picture, we can see that a group of people are trying to get to the final destination following the way directed by an a
12、rrow; while only one man is taking a short cut.In our daily life, many people have got used to the common practices of settling problems. They just follow others, without thinking independently. They are unaware that there are better solutions, just like the majority of the people in the picture, no
13、ne of whom has found the short cut. The only man, in contrast, has thought out of the box, which definitely saves him great effort and much time. So in my opinion, whatever we do, we should never stick to a fixed idea and then we can find out a most effective way.【范围亮点】1.成文模式： in the picture，we can
14、see that ；In our daily life；So in my opinion；2.经典句子：（1）we can see that a group of people are trying to get to the final destination following the way directed by an arrow; while only one man is taking a short cut.（2）They are unaware that there are better solutions, just like the majority of the peop
15、le in the picture, none of 精品资料 - - - 欢迎下载 - - - - - - - - - - - 欢迎下载 名师归纳 - - - - - - - - - -第 4 页，共 19 页 - - - - - - - - - - whom has found the short cut.3.过渡词语： in contrast, So in my opinion，In the picture, In our daily life,。4. 【2013 届北京海淀区高三期末】 书面表达（共两节， 35 分）第一节情景作文（ 20 分）某互联网消费调研中心对网络购物进行了调查，
16、结果如下。请根据图表1 提供的信息描 述人们选择网络购物的不同原因，并针对图表2 中任意一个数据所反映的情况谈谈你的看法。词数不少于 60。注意：文章的开头已经给出。Recently, a survey about online shopping has been conducted on the Internet. _( 请务必将情景作文写在答题卡指定区域内）精品资料 - - - 欢迎下载 - - - - - - - - - - - 欢迎下载 名师归纳 - - - - - - - - - -第 5 页，共 19 页 - - - - - - - - - - 5. 【2013 届北京海淀区高三期
17、末】第二节开放作文（15 分）请根据下面提示，写一篇短文。词数不少于50。You are discussing the following picture with your English friend Jim. Now you are telling him how you understand the picture and what makes you think so.( 请务必将开放作文写在答题卡指定区域内）精品资料 - - - 欢迎下载 - - - - - - - - - - - 欢迎下载 名师归纳 - - - - - - - - - -第 6 页，共 19 页 - - - -
18、- - - - - - 【参考范文】Possible version Jim, as you can see, there is a river and a group of ants in the picture. Some ants are working together to build an “ant bridge ” so that their group members are able to cross the river and reach their final destination. In my opinion, this picture vividly shows t
19、he importance of teamwork. It is impossible for a single ant to cross the river, but when they work together as a group, they can achieve their goals. Similarly in our life, an individual person cannot easily carry out a challenging task on his own without joining hands w ith others. In fact, there
20、are a lot of occasions when teamwork is needed, such as ball games, project learning and even parties. This is my understanding of the picture. Dont you think so, Jim?【经典句子】1. 复合句 Some ants are working together to build an “ant bridge” so that their group members are able to cross the river and reac
21、h their final destination.2. It is impossible for a single ant to cross the river, but when they work together as a group, they can achieve their goals.精品资料 - - - 欢迎下载 - - - - - - - - - - - 欢迎下载 名师归纳 - - - - - - - - - -第 7 页，共 19 页 - - - - - - - - - - 3. As long as every one of us combines our effor
22、ts, we can surely cross the “river ” in our life, just like what the little ants do in the picture.6. 【2013 届黑龙江大庆铁人中学第三阶段考试】假定你是杨明，作为一名交换生（an exchange student）刚结束在英国为期一个月的学习。学习期间，你和房东MrWilson 结下了深厚的友谊。请按下列要点给MrWilson 发一封邮件：1对 MrWilson 在你生活上的照顾和学习上的帮助表示感谢；2希望保持联系；3邀请他来中国游玩。注意：1词数： 120 左右；2可以适当增加细节，以
23、使行文连贯；3开头已经写好，不计人总词数；Dear MrWilson,Time flies! Ive been back homeBest wishes Yours, Yang Ming精品资料 - - - 欢迎下载 - - - - - - - - - - - 欢迎下载 名师归纳 - - - - - - - - - -第 8 页，共 19 页 - - - - - - - - - - 【思路点拨】本文是一篇提纲式书面表达。 成文时应注意：1.内容要点要齐全； （1） 对 Mr Wilson在你生活上的照顾和学习上的帮助表示感谢；（2）希望保持联系；（3）邀请他来中国游玩。 2. 人称：以第一人称
24、为主； 3. 适当使用连词、插入语使文章自然、流畅；4. 恰当使用一些高级词汇和句型以增加文章的档次。7.【2013届河南开封市高三第一次模拟】越来越多的人拥有微博（ micro-blog） ，下表反映了人们对微博的不同看法：一部分人认为：另一部分人认为：1展示才华、分享经验；1花费很多时间和精力精品资料 - - - 欢迎下载 - - - - - - - - - - - 欢迎下载 名师归纳 - - - - - - - - - -第 9 页，共 19 页 - - - - - - - - - - 2认识朋友、增加知识2影响工作和休息。假如你是李华，请你根据以上表格的内容提示，给某英语报社写一篇10
25、0 词左右的英语短文，并发表自己的看法。注意： 1词数 100 左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2所写短文需包括已提供的所有信息； 3可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【构思点拨】随着电脑和手机的普遍使用，有手机的同学基本上都开通了微博。因此，网上发表微博日记已是常事。这是一个熟悉的话题，贴近学生生活，让学生有话可说。这是一篇图表类写作，是一篇议论文。采用三段成文法，第一段叙述微博对学生的好处；第二段叙述开通微博的弊端；第三段发表自己的建议和理由。8.【2013届湖北省黄冈中学、 孝感中学期末联考】：短文写作 （共 1 题：满分 30 分）请根据以下提示，并结合事例，用英语写一篇短文。If
26、we face our problems and respond to them positively, and refuse to give in to panic, bitterness, or self-pity, the adversities(逆境) that appear to bury us usually have the potential to benefit and bless us! Endeavor(奋斗), hope and perseverance(毅力) are helpful in shaking it off and stepping up out of t
27、he adversities in which we find ourselves.精品资料 - - - 欢迎下载 - - - - - - - - - - - 欢迎下载 名师归纳 - - - - - - - - - -第 10 页，共 19 页 - - - - - - - - - - 注意：无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语；除诗歌外，文体不限；文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；字数为 120左右。【参考范文】One possible version:Faced with the adversities, I tended to be at a loss, lacking motivation to
28、 go on. However, life in high school has taught me that perseverance will light up my life and help me out.When I first entered high school, I found everything was changed. Difficult lessons and excellent classmates threw me into a position where I had to strugg le hard. Despite my hard work, the re
29、sults would be discouraging. Gradually, life was beginning to stress me out. Challenging as it was, I didn t give up, because every time I wanted to, the Old Man and the Sea wou ld remind me that only with perseverance can I catch my big fish. I decided that I stick it out, following my teachers adv
30、ice. Finally, I made it.精品资料 - - - 欢迎下载 - - - - - - - - - - - 欢迎下载 名师归纳 - - - - - - - - - -第 11 页，共 19 页 - - - - - - - - - - Later, whatever difficult situation I deal with, I always keep in mind that perseverance will carry us though.9. 【2013 届东北三省四市协作体联考】书面表达（满分 25分）假定你是李华，是一位高中生。iPad 已经成为你们中学生的新宠
31、。用iPad 既可以听音乐，阅读电子书，又可以玩电子游戏。请你用英语给某英语报社写一封信，谈谈中学生使用 iPad 的情况。信的内容包括以下要点：1. 积极因素；2. 负面影响；3. 看法建议。要求： 1. 词数 100 左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 信的开头和结尾已为你写好。Dear Editor, I am a senior high school student, named Li Hua. _精品资料 - - - 欢迎下载 - - - - - - - - - - - 欢迎下载 名师归纳 - - - - - - - - - -第 12 页，共 19 页 - - -
32、 - - - - - - - _ Yours sincerely, Li Hua【参考范文】Dear Editor,I m a senior high school student, named Li Hua. Now it s a fashion formany students to have iPads. Using an iPad, we can listen to music, download a lot of learning materials and read them on the screen. Apparently, its helpful to our study,
33、especially to our English listening. Some students, however, bring their iPads to classroom listening to music with earphones or even playing video games, which makes the teacher and other students greatly annoyed. In my opinion, classroom is a place for students to study in, and concentration is aw
34、fully needed for us. Therefore, we should make good use of iPads to help achieve academic success. Furthermore, the school should make a rule to guide the students to use iPads in a proper way.Yours sincerely,精品资料 - - - 欢迎下载 - - - - - - - - - - - 欢迎下载 名师归纳 - - - - - - - - - -第 13 页，共 19 页 - - - - -
35、- - - - - Li Hua10. 【2013 届湖北省武汉市武昌区高三调研】短文写作（共 1 题；满分 30 分）请根据以下提示，并结合事例，用英语写一篇短文。 Difficulties arise in the lives of us all What is most important is dealing with the hard times, coping with the changes, and getting through to the other side where the sun is still shining just for you注意：无须写标题，不得照抄
36、英语提示语；除诗歌外，文体不限：文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；词数为 120 左右。【 参 考 范文】Sample writing:There is no denying that difficulties arise in the lives of us all But what really counts is how we deal with the difficulties to succeedThree years ago, when I began my senior high school study, I found it extremely 精品资料 - - - 欢迎下载
37、- - - - - - - - - - - 欢迎下载 名师归纳 - - - - - - - - - -第 14 页，共 19 页 - - - - - - - - - - difficult to learn English well because there were so many new words and grammar rules to keep in mind Hard as I might try, I still did poorly in the English exams It was the hardest time in my life and I nearly los
38、t heart and decided to give up when my mother found my problem She encouraged me that it took a strong person to deal with tough times and if I chose to keep on and I would be a strong person and on the way to success In order to prove myself, I worked even harder than ever Gradually I began to catc
39、h up with the other students in my class At the end of term I got the highest mark in EnglishSo if we want to meet the shinning sun on the other side of the difficulties, we should first take great courage to overcome them and then enjoy the joy of success Sample writing:As a famous saying goes that
40、 life is not a bed of roses, we will always encounter difficulties or troubles in our daily life But what we do in difficult situations can really make a differenceHere is a story in my school life two years ago when I decided to take part in the 3,000-metre race I was confident before the race Unfo
41、rtunately, during the race，each step seemed extremely difficult for me Whats worse, I fell on the last lap，breaking my glasses as well as my chance of winning the race Give up or keep on? Without hesitation, I chose the latter “Come on You can do it! ” Everyone on the sports field was cheering for 精
42、品资料 - - - 欢迎下载 - - - - - - - - - - - 欢迎下载 名师归纳 - - - - - - - - - -第 15 页，共 19 页 - - - - - - - - - - me Although I was the last one to cross the finishing line ，I won the respect of my classmates and regained my confidenceFrom then on, I firmly believe that if we want to meet the shinning sun on the
43、other side of the difficulties, we should first take great courage to overcome them and then enjoy the happiness of success11. 【2013 届江西南昌高三调研】 书面表达（满分 25 分）某英语报社开辟了中学生习作专栏。本期的话题是：注重日常学习、工作和生活中的细节。因为细节往往决定成败。请你以“We Should Pay Much Attention to Details ”为题，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈自己的一些看法。注意： 1词数 120左右； 2短文中不能出现本人
44、相关信息。【思路点拨】本文是一篇命题作文， 属于议 论文类。成文时要注意：1. 提出论题 We Should Pay Much Attention to Details；2. 分析问题：为什么我们应该注意细节；3. 解决问题：我们应该怎样做，发表自己的看法。【参考范文】We Should Pay Much Attention to DetailsSome people may think that one who wants to achieve great success shouldn t pay much attention to details. But sometimes it is
45、 the details that determine 精品资料 - - - 欢迎下载 - - - - - - - - - - - 欢迎下载 名师归纳 - - - - - - - - - -第 16 页，共 19 页 - - - - - - - - - - our success, for they may be the very thing that has a great impact on what we re doing. Since we have realized the importance of details, what should we do? First, we sho
46、uld form the habit of being careful, because a careful person will rarely overlook details. Whats more, we should learn to keep the balance of quantity and quality. We may find that when faced with lots of work, the faster we do it, the more mistakes we will make. Why? Because when we work at high s
47、peed, the only thing we care about is quantity in which case we are more likely to neglect the details.As far as I m concerned, we should keep it in mind that quality comes first, without which quantity is of no significance.12.【2013 届宁夏银川二中高三10 月考】假设你是李华。 最近， 你的外国笔友 Alice 沉迷于小说，不能自拔，你为此非常担心，请按下列要点给
48、对方写一封信：1.阐述危害；2.提出建议和解决办法；3.表达信心。词数： 120词左右。可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯。Dear Alice,精品资料 - - - 欢迎下载 - - - - - - - - - - - 欢迎下载 名师归纳 - - - - - - - - - -第 17 页，共 19 页 - - - - - - - - - - YoursLi Hua【参考范文】Dear Alice I m worried to know that you should be addicted to novels these days. As you know, reading novels too
49、 much is bad for your eyes. Besides, if youre always thinking about the novels, how can you focus attention on your study? With time going by, Im afraid youll fall behind others sooner or later.In my opinion, you can find something interesting to do if you want to relax: for example, take a walk on
50、the playground with your friends. Alternatively, you may just have a chat with your classmates, which will cheer you up in a way. I dont mean novels should be refused in our life, but too much will surely affect your study.I know you have a strong will and you are clever. I believe you can get rid o