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1、2022年中考英语作文备考范文汇总2022中考英语作文备考范文汇总 假设你是李平,最近你学习上遇到了困惑,请用英语给你的英国挚友Nancy写一封电子邮件。讲解并描述你的问题并寻求帮助。 留意:1、邮件必需包括下面三幅画所描述的内容; 2、词数80左右,开头和结尾已给出(不计词数)。 参考词汇:考试不及格fail the exam熬夜stay up late. Hi Nancy, How are you? Hope youre well. _ Im really looking forward to receiving your reply soon. Love, Li Ping 01 首先,明
2、确题目要点,知道要写哪些内容,内容要全,不能遗漏,最好一一划下。此文中必要内容包括:妈妈对考试结果很生气;我熬夜做作业老师问“Whats wrong with you?”,最终要有所给参考词汇。 其次,列好文章的提纲,最好用经典的三段式,把事情说清晰,有逻辑地表达。适当依据画的内容进行绽开叙述,使文章更加丰富。 第三,要想要获得高分,要多用连词如besides, whats more, in order to、while等; 多用句型it is adj to do sth.被动句,疑问句等。 最终,写完文章要通读一遍,尽量削减语法错误。当遇到不会写的单词,用另外的意思表达,只要文章通顺即可,不
3、要扣字。不要出现chinglish的表达。 02 Hi Nancy, How are you? Hope youre well.I have a problem and need your help. Ifailed the math exam yesterday.My mom was really mad at me.In order to do better next time,I stayed up late last nightdoing my math homework. Since I didnt get enough sleep,I felt sleepy his morning
4、. My teacher noticed it.She came up and asked what was wrong with me.But I didnt tell her the truth. What should I do? Can you give me some advice? Im really looking forward to receiving your reply soon. Love, Li Ping 七、书面表达 依据下表用英语写一篇80词的短文,内容须包括:对下表中关于两个城市(City A和City B)的全部信息进行比较,分析利弊,确定其中一个城市作为你的
5、暑假旅游目的地。 In my opinion, _ is the better place to spend my summer holiday._. 01 In my opinion,City A is the better place to spend my summer holiday.Althoughthe temperature there is higher, the hotel is less comfortable,and eventhe food is not as delicious as that in City B, I still choose City A. The
6、 most important reason is that I canhave a lot of things to do in City A.I can enjoy more beautiful scenery anddo more activities. Besides, ittakes us only two hours to fly there,which saves us a lot of time. I hope the holiday will be an unforgettable experience. In my opinion,City B is the better
7、place to spend my summer holiday.Although it takes me two more hours to fly there on an airplane, and I dont have many things to do, I still choose City B. The most important reason is that City B has better weather, not too hot or too cold. Besides, the hotel there is more comfortable and the food
8、is more delicious than that in City A. All these make my holiday more relaxing. I hope the coming summer holiday will be an unforgettable experience. 书面表达(共1小题,满分15分) 请查看你校英语节支配(Schedule),给你的外教老师Dave写一封80词左右的电子邮件,告知他调整的内容并给出你认为恰当的理由。 Subject: From: To: Hi Dave, Li Ping 01 虽然今年中考作文避开了大家争论的特别喧闹的G20峰会和
9、环境主题,但是主题的选择也特别的贴合最近几年的出题方向,也不会令考生手足无措,总体侧重语言运用的好用性。 1.格式方面:文章为是书信、通知类,因为开头和结尾题干中都会给出,所以不必太担忧。 2.审题方面:我们看到今年的写作要求,在文字叙述上特别的精炼,相对于平常练习的的真题模拟题来说,是有利于考生干脆获得关键信息的。难点在于对表格中信息的处理,以及更改缘由的语言组织。所以审题还是仍旧要特殊留意不要漏掉关键词和要求,保证信息的完整性。 3.构思方面:侧重点在内容的规划和语言表达上。尤其是要总结出通知中有变动的是部分的时间和地点。没有变动的内容我们不须要再重复一遍。所以考生只须要针对变动做出说明,
10、并须要说明理由,但在所给的信息中完全没有涉及到缘由,这就须要考生发挥创建性,所给理由既要合理,又要确保英文表达无误。这里是最考验考生的中英文转换实力,很简单出现中式英语的现象。 4.结构方面:要特殊留意结构的完整性,开头可表示歉意,过渡到其次部分变更的内容及缘由,结尾要体现礼貌和期望,希望外教老师能够到场,假如字数还不够,还可以说一下外教老师出席的必要性。 02 Hi, Dave, Im sorry to inform you thatthere are two changes to the schedule for English Day.First,there will be a very
11、 important meeting after lunch in our school, soEnglish Talk Show will be put off by 30 minutes.That is, it starts at 13:00 and ends at 14:30.Second,the place of English Corner will be changed from Playground to School Hallbecause the weather report says its going to rain that afternoon. Please come
12、 and join us on time. Li Ping 假定你是李平,请你对意大利交换生Armino的邮件进行回复,词数80词左右。 To: Li Ping From: Armino Hi Li Ping, How are you? I hope youre fine and not too busy! I cant wait to leave for China next week. But could you tell me something about Chinese table manners? What places of interest can I visit when I
13、 am in your city? See you soon! Armino To: Armino From: Li Ping Hi Armino _ Li Ping 01 今年作文是关于我们九年级第十单元的餐桌礼仪部分以及介绍景点的内容。 1.格式方面:文章为是书信类,依据已有的邮件进行回复,开头和结尾已经给出。 2.审题方面:依据题目的信息可以看到,作文的要求是要依据邮件进行回信,所以须要我们对来信内容有很好地审核,主要包括两个方面,一是要介绍我们中国的餐桌礼仪,二是要介绍我们所在城市的闻名景点。所以这两方面都要写到。从考察的内容看,这次的作文还是比较贴近课本,餐桌礼仪及景点介绍在我们书上
14、都有接触到过,平常这类的作文也有练习过,所以平常每个单元的作文练习还是要引起重视。 3.构思方面:关于餐桌礼仪,九年级第十单元涉及到相关内容,尤其可以用到句型be supposed to do的句型来表达。景点部分要抓住有特色或者较为闻名的景点,可以干脆举例杭州的出名景点进行描述。 4.结构方面:作文肯定要留意格式和层次。经典的三段式:包括引入,得知远方挚友要来的寒暄;邮件问题的有效回复,包括餐桌礼仪及景点介绍的内容;最终特殊留意结构的完整性,结尾要体现礼貌和期望。 02 Hi Armino, Im glad to hear from you and cant wait to see you
15、in China . I thinkI can give you some information about table manners in China and places of interest in my city. First,there are indeed some table manners in China that you should pay attention to.When you have dinner with older people, you are not supposed to eat first.Besides,its impolite to poin
16、t at anyone with chopsticks and talk with your mouth full. As forplaces of interest,Hangzhou is famous for the West Lake, the Hangzhou National Tea Museum, the Song Dynasty Town and so on.You can enjoy not only the beauty of the nature but also the culture of the Song Dynasty. Im looking forward to
17、seeing you! Li Ping 假定你是李平.家住滨海市人民路1号.你在美国旅行期间,不慎遗失钱包,曾向宾馆询.以下是宾馆的答复邮件,请你阅读后进行回复,词数80左右. From: Mr. Smith, hotel manager Hl Li Ping, Thank you for your email about your lost wallet. Please send me some more information. When did you stay in our hotel and what room were you in? Please describe your wa
18、llet. What was in it? Send me your address and phone number. All the best, Mr. Smith To: Mr. Smith Subject: Lost wallet Dear Mr. Smith, _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ Yours, Li Ping 01 今年作文是关于我们七年级上第三单元的遗失启事的内容。 1.格式方面:文章为是书信类,依据已有的邮件进行回复,开头和结尾已经给出。 2.审题方面:依据题目的信息可以看到,作文的要求是要依据邮件进行回信,所以须要我们对来信内容有很好地审核,每个问题都须要回复。
19、从考察的内容看,这次的作文还是比较贴近生活实际和课本,平常这类的作文也有练习过,所以平常每个单元的作文练习还是要引起重视。 3.结构方面:作文肯定要留意格式和层次。感谢回复-清楚回答相关问题-提出归还恳求-再次感谢。 02 One possible version: Dear Mr. Smith, Thank you so much for your reply.I stayed in your hotel on July 6 in Room 105and I remember having left mynew blackwallet on the table.My ID card, two
20、 credit cards as well as a 100-dollar bill are in my wallet.Would you be kind enough tosend me the wallet to No.1 Renmin Road, Binhai, China by mailif you find it? Please call me onmy phone number 1361234567if needed. Thanks again.(80词) Yours, Li Ping 假定你是李平,最近收到意大利挚友Linda的电子邮件。以下是邮件的一部分,请你阅读后回复,词数8
21、0左右。 01 今年作文是关于我们七年级下第九单元的人物介绍的内容。 1.格式方面:文章为是书信类,依据已有的邮件进行回复,开头和结尾已经给出。 2.审题方面:依据题目的信息可以看到,作文的要求是要依据邮件进行回信,所以须要我们对来信内容有很好地审核,每个问题都须要回复。从考察的内容看,这次的作文还是比较贴近生活实际和课本,平常这类的作文也有练习过,所以平常每个单元的作文练习还是要引起重视。 3.结构方面:作文肯定要留意格式和层次。感谢回复-清楚回答相关问题-提出归还恳求-再次感谢。 02 One possible version: Dear Linda, Thank you so much
22、for agreeing to show my brother around Rome. Now let me tell you something about my brother. He is thirteen years old, easy-going and humorous - we get along really well. He loves different cultures. He is interested in museums and likes trying local food. My brother is also cute. Hes of medium heig
23、ht with short straight black hair. He is good at Chinese kung fu, and usually wears T-shirts and jeans. Thanks again for your help! Yours, Li Ping 思路点拨: 1.表明回信目的 Thank you so much for agreeing to show my brother around Rome. Now let me tell you something about my brother. 2.回答题目要求的四个问题 He is thirtee
24、n years old, easy-going and humorous - we get along really well. He loves different cultures. He is interested in museums and likes trying local food. My brother is also cute. Hes of medium height with short straight black hair. He is good at Chinese kung fu, and usually wears T-shirts and jeans. 3.
25、表示感谢 Thanks again for your help! 评分标准 评分原则: 1.按5个档次给分。中档属第三档。 2.按学生所写内容和所用语言确定档次。 3.总词数不足40个可在本题总得分中扣去3分(2022年为总次数不足40个可在本题总得分中扣去1分;如书写整齐美观,可在本题总得分中加1分)。 4.评分要点:(2022年为内容要点要全) 邮件开头和结尾表达得体。 餐桌礼仪介绍。 巡游地点举荐及理由。 卷面整齐。 词数符合要求。 5.各档次的给分范围和要求: 第五档 :完全完成试题规定的任务。 信息全。语言可读性强,语言结构基本正确,有少量错误。 第四档 :完全完成试题规定的任务。
26、有主要信息。语言基本正确,有一些错误。 第三档 :基本完成试题规定的任务。 有主要信息。语言尚可读,有一些错误,但尚能达意。 其次档: 未能恰当完成试题规定的任务。, 信息不全。只有个别句子可读,语言错误较多,且不能达意。 第一档;未能完成试题规定的任务。 不能表达有关信息。只有几个相关单词,语言错误许多,不能达意。 留意:凡不写任何内容。抄袭其他内容、所写内容无法看请者一律给0分。 第19页 共19页第 19 页 共 19 页第 19 页 共 19 页第 19 页 共 19 页第 19 页 共 19 页第 19 页 共 19 页第 19 页 共 19 页第 19 页 共 19 页第 19 页 共 19 页第 19 页 共 19 页第 19 页 共 19 页